Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Choice and Consequences, by JustBiteMePlease


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4785471/1/Choice_and_Consequences
Official Description: 17 year old Bella is fascinated by the elusive and mysterious Edward Cullen. Will he be all she dreamed of? Or more than she bargained for? And will she still want him when one night changes everything? A/U Cannon pairings COMPLETE

ACTUAL FULL-ON REVIEW IS STILL TO COME
in the meantime...

Vamp AU. I love this story!! I don't know how I came across it but it deals with a Bella who is crushing on a mysterious vamp Edward. At a party, he and Bella find themselves in the throws of passion. Bella declares her love, and Edward asks, "Forever?" Her reply unknowingly sets into motion a transformation into something she never knew existed, and most certainly never chose to be.

This story poses the question, What if Bella was never given the opportunity to choose the life of a vampire? Edward must earn her love and trust, having essentially plucked her from the friends, family and life she knew against her will, and damned her to a life as a vampire. This is no easy task as she sees him more as her killer.

[FROM HERE ON DOWN, IT'S SPOILERTOWN]

There are great moments as her new family tries to get her acclimated to the lifestyle of resisting human blood. This Edward is oddly clueless when it comes to Bella, as he is genuinely not sorry for what he has done. Emmett gives him great advice that he has to demonstrate to Bella that he truly respected her human life, even though he ended it. There is another great moment when the rest of the family is attending Bella's funeral, and Edward is consoling her by explaining all that he knew and loved about human Bella.

I'm sure there will be more moments to note as well, so I will update this post as the story is updated...

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